In-Class Exercise 04/27/20

Stage directions:

The scene opens up to a neat urban house with white walls and black and white furniture. A black desk sits in a corner off to the side, holding a desktop computer. A woman, Sarah sits at the desk, deeply interested in the email pulled up on the screen. A man, Jake approaches her quickly.

Jake: “When do they want you to be there?”

Sarah: “They want me there by next week….”

Jake’s shoulders sag slightly.

Jake: “Oh…well, that’s wonderful, dear. They’ll be lucky to have someone like you.”

In Class Exercise 3/18/20

Sam walked through the front door with a grin while carrying Chinese takeout.

“Hey, guys,” he called. “I’m back! You wanted some food?”

Two men’s shadows covered the doorframe where his wife and her friend should have walked through.

“Ummm…hey guys. What are you doing here? Where’s my wife and her friend?”

The bigger of the two spoke, his voice deep and gravelly. “They’re upstairs taking a nap.”

“Alright. I’ll go and wake them up. I got them some food.” Sam nervously moved to step past them, but they stopped him.

“They’re fine. You’re staying down here.”

Panic began to overtake Sam.

In-Class Exercise 03/13/20

She fumbled with her keys, trying to get them in the ignition. The engine roared to life, and she slid out of the driveway, turning up and down every street as she went.

A black van squealed as it turned a corner. The boy started to cry for his mother as a hand went over his mouth, and the door closed.

Rounding a stop sign of a street one over from her own, an older man stepped back in surprise at the sudden movement. She rolled down her window.

“Have you seen my son? Please, sir, he was only in the yard playing a few minutes ago! Some people in a van grabbed him!”

The man looked at her with a sadness in his eyes that shook her to her core. “Ma’am, your son’s body was found last year at the bank of a creek.”

“…Amazing grace, how sweet the sound.” Black dresses surrounded a headstone around a small grave.

Fact and Truth in CNF

There seems to be a fine line between fact and truth in creaative nonfiction. Facts are things that are real and really cannot be changed or disputed. “The desk is black” would pretty much qualify as a fact. Truth can be stretched, or twisted, to make a story much more interesting to the reader. It can also be changed based off of the memory of the writer. The author has to make the story interesting, and they might, therefore, add a little bit of details that might not have been there or details that may be exaggerated.

“Sleepless Night” Model Post

June 23rd, 2018

Approximately 7:00 pm

Tick. Tick. Tick.

The minutes counted down around me, the rest of the day looming over my head. My sister had asked me to pick up our supper from a local restaurant, Dog N Suds. Fine by me. I love a good burrito. I climbed into my 2004 black Jeep Liberty, backed out of the drive, and answered a call from my mother at the stop sign. I put the phone on speaker and turned left onto the road. 

Tick. Tick. Tick.

I can’t remember the conversation that we were having right then. 

Tick. Tick.

I do remember reaching over to turn down the air so I could hear her better. I looked up to see a car approaching the stop sign to my left far too quickly for my liking. 

Tick. Tick.

My brain didn’t have time to send the signals to my hands or feet to move the wheel or hit the brakes.

Tick.

I don’t remember the feeling of the impact. I don’t remember the airbag deploying. I don’t remember blacking out. But, I remember the sound of the tires squealing and of glass shattering. I looked up to see my vehicle facing the direction the car had come from, but I was now in someone’s yard.

It Really Happened

It was a warm day at my cousin’s house. We had spent it playing outside, as ten and eleven-year-olds do. As the sun began to set, my two cousins, my two sisters, and myself decided to play hide and seek, as the hiding spots would be more abundant. Since they lived on a road in the country with about five roads branching off of it, theirs being the last, we decided to play on those as well but to use a signal to give hints as to where we were. The seeker would yell, “Pump it!” and the hiders would yell back, “Louder!” It was a joke on our favorite song to dance to on Just Dance 3.

My cousin, Cody, and I wanted to go a little farther away to hide on one of the other streets. We ran up to the first street from the highway, hiding carefully in the shadows, and hid behind a RV trailer postioned across from an old man’s house, who happened to be outside at this point. He stared at us as we crept out from behind his trailer, and my cousin called back, “Have a good night, sir!” as we ran off down his street. We got one street over, admiring how well the trees cast shadows from the moon and discussing how that could be our new hangout at some point. While we were talking, a truck drove down the first street and turned right, heading towards my cousin’s house.

I turned to look at Cody. “Was that the old man from that house?”

He seemed to be thinking that as well, but when he didn’t turn down our road, we didn’t worry about it much anymore. However, about five or less minutes later, that same truck pulled onto our road. My cousin and I both shrunk into the shadows, hiding behind the base of separate trees, whispering back and forth. The truck rode slowly down the street, a spotlight searching for us. Once he got far enough down the street, we bolted.

We took off towards the end of the road, running towards Cody’s house, two small dogs coming from a nearby yard and running at our heels. The truck spun around quickly and sped after us. We got around the stop sign and jumped across the ditch into someone’s yard as he sped around the stop sign right behind us. He pulled into the yard, got out, and at that moment, I was almost sure that he would pull a gun on us. He did not.

He screamed at us to come here, and then, he proceeded to yell at us for trying to scare his mother, how he had already called the sheriff and he was on his way, how he was a U.S. Marshall, and that we were gonna go to juvenile detention. I was frozen in terror, as was Cody, but he was the only one able to form any kind of response, stuttering an apology and how we wouldn’t come back. When he got done, we walked off, sure to not let him know where we were walking to and then booked it once we got out of his sight.

Once back on his road, my sister met us, anger contorting her features as she yelled at us, telling us that they had been looking for us and asking where we had been. However, that was all cut short almost immediately when she saw our faces and I ran and hugged her and started to cry. She asked what happened, we went inside and told my mom and my aunt, and mama bears appeared in a fierce moment. They asked where he lived, told us to stay there, and went to his house, where they set him in his place. He lied to us about all of it (which we soon had figured out anyways) and he thought we were both boys trying to cause trouble.

Once they got back, we found out that we could press charges against him: for him getting in the truck with the intent to find us, for chasing us with his truck, and endangering the life of minors. We decided to not press charges in the end, but there has become a sort of inside joke in our family about a ‘Fake U.S. Marshall.’

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